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IM 시리즈 003 오픽IM/IH 를 벗어나는 Rule#7

☞ 오픽노잼 IM 시리즈 003 링크 ☜

 

< 질문 >

Describe the home you lived in as a child.

How was that home different from the home you live in now?

 

< 학생 답변 >

My childhood’s home..

Oh, actually I can’t remember very specifically, but one thing I just remember very clearly it was so huge house.

Sofa, furnitures, chairs, desks.. everything was so huge. so big.

it’s feels like I was a ant.

Because I think I was a little girl that’s why I feeled like everyhing was so big.

Now, I’m live in more big house.

But I’m still need more place.

I feels it’s not bigger than when I was kid is.

Oh, maybe I’m growing so that's why I fells like it.

 

< 답변 수정 >

My childhood’s home..

[질문에 있는 단어 사용은 Good 고민하는 모습]

 

Oh, actually I can’t remember very specifically, but one thing I just remember very clearly it was so huge house.

▶ Oh, actually I can’t remember very specifically, but one thing I just remember very clearly it was so huge house.

▶ (문법 수정)I can’t remember very specifically, but one thing I do remember is that it was clearly a huge house.

[Rule #7 Make “honest excuses” later. Not in the beginning! 솔직한 변명은 나중에 하기]

[Comparison 전략]
MP(pure present): 과거에 대해 말하지말기. my place now is so much bigger compared to the past. 조차 금지
 (예시) I live by myself in a normal looking apartment. I would say it’s pretty small, but I love how big my washroom is.
Past: 메인포인트에서 말한 것 과거와 연관지어 말하기
Present: 메인포인트에서 말한 것을 다시 조금 더 설명
Conclusion: 결론

 

Sofa, furnitures, chairs, desks.. everything was so huge. so big.

▶ The sofa, furnitures, chairs, desks.. everything was so huge. so big.

 

it’s feels like I was a ant.

▶ I truly felt like an ant!

 

Because I think I was a little girl that’s why I feeled like everyhing was so big

▶ feeled -> felt

 

Now, I’m live in more big house.

▶ Now, I’ m living in an even bigger home.

 

But I’m still need more place.

▶ But I still feel like I need more space. I just can’t believe it!

 

I feels it’s not bigger than when I was kid is.

▶ Even though it’s definitely a bigger place, I feel like it’s similar from when I was a kid.

[다시 과거로 돌아가는 것은 위험]

▶Even though it’s definitely a bigger place, I still feel like it’s not that big.

 

Oh, maybe I’m growing so that's why I fells like it.

▶ oh, maybe i’m growing so my perspective is changing.

[단어를 모르면 설명하기 힘들다]

 

 

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004 IM 시리즈 오픽하느님, 질문을 들을 땐 무슨 생각을 해야 하나요?

☞ 오픽노잼 IM 시리즈 003 링크 ☜

 

- 전혀 모르는 질문은 skip이 더 좋은 방법이다.

- 처음 질문을 물어볼 때, 어떤 주제인지 어떤 카테고리인지 집중하라.

- 두 번째 질문을 들을 때, 카테고리의 전략을 생각하라.

- 여러 가지 카테고리 일 때 둘 중 하나의 전략만 써도 된다. 카테고리도 모르겠으면 skip하라.

ex) you indicated in the survey that you stay at home for vacations. Who are the people would like to see and spend time with on your vacation? description/habit 카테고리 중 하나를 선택하라.

 

< 질문 >

you indicated in the survey that you stay at home for vacations. Who are the people would like to see and spend time with on your vacation?

 

< 학생 답변 >

vacations at home.. alright

Um, I’m living with my family, uh, at home.

So whether I like it or not, I have to see my family during vacation.

Um, and it made me so annoyed because, um, as I already told you before, l’m not that outgoing person.

So, I prefer to spend my own time rather than spending time with someone.

So, I prefer the things like, um, just seeing YOUTUBE... watching YOUTUBE...or listening to music... mmm.. or just searching the internet something like that.

But with family, it’s so hard because, yeah, my family always wants to, yeah, keep talking with me.

And so, I really hope I can buy my own house in the future.

 

< 답변 수정 >

 

카테고리: habit

 

vacations at home.. alright

[질문있는 단어쓰며 오케이보다 오라잇이 더 좋다]

 

Um, I’m living with my family, uh, at home.

▶ I’m currently living with my parents.

▶ I live with my parents these days.

▶ I live in my parent’s home

[family -> parents 너무 넓은 범위 at home -> 삭제]

[짧게 시작해서 좋다]

 

So whether I like it or not, I have to see my family during vacation.

▶ So whether I like it or not, I have to be with my parents.

▶ So whether I like it or not, I have no choice but to be with my parents.

▶ So whether I like it or not, I’m totally stuck with my parents.

 

Um, and it made me so annoyed because, um, as I already told you before, l’m not that outgoing person.

▶ Um, and it makes me so annoyed because, / Um, and it annoys me so much because,

[made -> make 카테고리가 habit 이기 때문에]

▶ I’m not that outgoing. [person 제거]

▶ I’m not an outgoing person (at all).

▶ I’m not extroverted at all.

 

So, I prefer to spend my own time rather than spending time with someone.

▶ So, I prefer to be by myself.

▶ So, I prefer to spend time alone.

▶ rather than spend time with someoneelse.

▶ rather than hang out with friends/meet people/go out

 

So, I prefer the things like, um, just seeing YOUTUBE... watching YOUTUBE...or listening to music... mmm.. or just searching the internet something like that.

 

But with family, it’s so hard because, yeah, my family always wants to, yeah, keep talking with me.

▶ But I can’t do anything with my parents around. they always want to talk with me.

▶ (추가) I mean, don’t get me wrong, I love them to death. but sometimes, I just need to be alone.

 

And so, I really hope I can buy my own house in the future.

▶ And so, I really hope I can buy my own house in the future.

▶ And so, I really hope I can move out soon.

▶ And so, I really want to get out of here soon [out of > outta]